your biggest mistake

harried conversation
postured
as the tiendas
on three sides
my back up against the wall

spanglish with grammar mistakes
confused grins
the tension’s wax-paper thin

slightly rotten fruit
for sixty cents
        food here is cheap
        we don’t know
        we can sell it for more

        the conversion rate’s set
        in blood and grimaces

sickly sweet,
the way you try so hard

stilted prose
slitted eyes
you
can do so much
better
than this

written f10jun2011.

the first of three poems written that day. i wrote them all one after another on my spanish class’ field trip to a spanish market in the cities.

it was really noisy, overstimulating. i felt a little trapped. thankfully my poetry notebook was there to help.

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Author: korey

minnesotan writer/musician.

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